Description questions to ask yourself
Have you presented description without sufficient regard to point of view?
Have you neglected to present descriptions from the appropriate physical perspective ?
Are your descriptions of characters too brief or too slapdash?
Do you open the story with an overlong description of the setting”!
Do you devote too much space to creating atmosphere?
Are your descriptions of characters, setting, and objects unrelated to a conception!
Are your descriptions inconsistent with the context!
Have you neglected to present description in directly?
Have you written inert blocks of description?
Do your descriptions fail to activate the reader’s senses?
Are some of your descriptions unintentionally melodramatic?
Are some of your descriptions unintentionally sentimental?
Do you commit the pathetic fallacy?
Do you use terms or details that will eventually date your story?