Part 1 – Stating the scene goal (1 short paragraph)
Part 2 – Suspense building (a few paragraphs)
Have theknowingly enter a dangerous situation, often using emphasis on a barrier such as a door. Use vivid description and use audio sensory details. Display character emotions of foreboding, aim for reader emotion of suspense.
Part 3 – Increasing danger
Use action and emotion for this part. Thefinds out he’s in more danger than he thought. The allies either let him down or get cut off. Display character emotion of anger, frustration and apprehension.
Part 4 – The first confrontation
Protagonist faces a henchman and needs to outwit or defeat him (often in a physical fight). Use hard sounding words and vary sentence length. Emotions: excitement, apprehension, revulsion and or horror.
Part 5 – Escape
Themakes a narrow escape. Write in a fast pace.
Part 6 – Trough (one paragraph)
A brief moment of assumed safety (slow pace). Thegets one moment to catch his breath. The reader gets a moment of relaxation before tension is risen again.
Part 7 – Realisation
Themade a terrible mistake. He feels panic, intense fear. If he hasn’t made a mistake yet, he makes one now because of his panic. Vary sentence length.
Part 8 – Main confrontation
Protagonist faces the scene antagonist. Possibly in a physical fight (face pace). He feels intense fear. He must stay in control of his emotions and take action so avoid using a sense of panic or terror at this stage.
Part 9 – Aftermath
He either escaped, became imprisoned (doomed) or defeated the antagonist. He is no longer in acute danger (write similarly as you did in part 6) and slow the pace. Protagonist assesses the situation and forms a plan. End the scene with his resolve to take specific action.
Bell, J. S. (2011) Crafting novels & Short Stories.